Friday, January 19, 2007

model places

wood-carved otherness inhabited;
movements of mystic formless charlatan
a model snake inevitably.
model, ricketly.
quoting ineptitude, indurate forms
perfect awkward positions
with counterpointing movements
polemic fits yes, similar. divague
outside awkward decan otherness
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Percival said...

Must you reveal our all to the entire world? As to "wood carved otherness" and "model snake" - well, OK. But "rickety?"

"Rickety" is quite impossible you know...

carmen said...

pers, mon ami, no, i don't know.

/t., i couldn't agree more...or less

Crashtest Comic said...

almost like a village coffee house on the Net.

Like what you've done with the place...not too crazy about the rough crowd you're attracting.

Right, /t?


carmen said...

thanks, crash...
i AM only rough , only stupid, only stubborn, only lax... subtle....when i choose to...
i am in a strange world...trying to learn things, that's all

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carmen said...

why, /t.??

Anonymous said...

is not
the way
it's supposed
to be, carmen -- so that is reason enough to do it, yes? why not?


Little Lamb said...

cute picture

Paul said...

Cher Ange,

Carmen, Carmen, Where art thou, Carmen?

I made an error in the jousting rules and have posted on it today.

May it be not a source of pain to thee.

With courtly courtesy and longing,

Votre Perci

Anonymous said...


please come out to play


carmen said...

LL, YOU are cute...
/t., what do we play today??/
perse, mon verre ami, je suis pretter than ever...i dedicate all my strength and efforts to writing the ode to you, my's a real marvel, perse...